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Practice- Flower by Prafa-AR Practice- Flower by Prafa-AR
Well, this is a little practice for my drawing. I am so busy that I only manage to draw a picture after a long time ago.

I hope you like it.
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It would be nice if the background weren't so blurred - that way, we'd be able to see the setting of the flowers. Although I can sort of make out bushes and more pink flowers.
Because in contrast with the actual flowers, the background is too blurry, and the edges of the flowers are too sharp. The two don't fit into each other, like they would in a natural photo. The sharp edges of the flowers make them appear as if they have just been plopped on top of the background, do you see what I mean? Especially since there's no evidence of depth perception - I can see an attempt, with the darker shades of petals underneath a couple of the flowers, but none at all on the background - again, this would've been less obvious if there was a bit more focus in the background.
Are the flowers vector images? Even so, I think a bit of variation in the pink petals would've helped create a realistic effect - maybe with the use of a light source?
What do you think?
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LeeyaKuchuk Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I cant write in the critique section [thougth I do have a premium] so I'll write my critique here (:

first, I read that critique about this peice and I have to disagree.
I think this is a great peice!
the flowers looked so reall that in the first second I thougth this was a photo! :XD:
the blurry background is really good, that way we can actually focus on the flowers.
if the bg ws ditailed and to "busy" there was to much colors and stuff in it.
thougth you could do it a little, just a little more ditailed, or more blurry pink so we can know that there are more flowers.
awesome job, keep it up! :D

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aniwablue Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, sooooo cute! I really love the background, the color, all of the sweet details! I love it all!
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